Being the verse i am..
so out of words ,so incomplete!
being the man i am
helplessly psychedelic
so numb ...up the feet!!
Blank is a nice place to be!
Sitting on a lonely bench
waiting for miracles to kiss
waiting for her
to unblank my wishful bliss
Crave for wish be fulfilled
carve for more..
seven sea and horizon four
I am left wanting my dignity sold
with my small hands not enough for more
blank is a nice place to be!
...atleast you dont promise me gold
- Rishi (original post Blank@orkut)
7 comments:
itne hard words kyu dalta hai
dictionary khol kar baithna para
i liked the dreams for sale more than this one..
actually dream can be sold.. maine ek movie dekhi thi on similar theme.. abhi yaad nahi ushka naam..
chalo welcome to bloggers
liked it :)
esp the idea of 'blank is a nice place to be'
I'm not very sure of how nice exactlty, though. mostly it hurts!
Brilliant!
was tryin to pick best lines..but its jus so difficult,with a poem like that..cheersss!
loved the verse... the line.. "blank is a nice place to be!" is my fave.. a real good one..
hey ... i didnt know people will actualy read my blog.. thank you so much strangers ... now that i got much awaited appreciation i will write more ...
"Blank is a nice place to be"..is actualy the caption of my forum in Recycle Bin(virtual insanity)@Orkut .. do visit .. i'l be more then happy to see you all there
ia m still trying to choose.. i liked the death one and blank verse one both.... but i guess i wud choose blank verse as my fav... tooo many possiblitiees.. fires my imagination
and yeah.... u got a nice loyal reader in me from now on
if u write regularly that is
Good one man.
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